Zenarra the Warrior Queen

Zenarra stood on the balcony surveying the rocky, desert terrain that surrounded the palace. She has been home for only a month but was restless already.  She missed her little house in The Valley of the Moon. She was called back to Lunaris by an urgent message from her mother begging her to return and fulfill her obligation to marry Prince Tomar, leader of the Dorchas Clan. Their marriage was arranged at birth by the two most powerful clans, the Dorchas and, her clan, the Solas.  Zenarra had hoped to escape this arranged marriage by leaving her home planet and starting a new life on Earth. But she was tracked down by a sensor that had been implanted when she was an infant. When she found out about it she had it removed, but she couldn’t ignore her mother’s plea. Queen Denarras had been her greatest ally when she was growing up among seven brothers and a powerful father, King Samar, head of the Solas Clan. Samar had died, under suspicious circumstances, on a hunting trip last Spring and Zenarra did not want her mother to face the Dorchas Clan alone.

So here she was dressed in her gown before the official engagement dinner that was to happen that evening. She felt so uncomfortable in this formal attire.

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Image by Cajsa Lillihook on Flickr


You look lovely darling. Zenarra turned to see her mother was standing behind her.

I hate these formal affairs mother and don’t like wearing this heavy gown. All the jewels and weight of this headdress make it hard to walk.

I know dear, I felt the same way the night of my betrothal to your father, Denarras eyes glistened as she gazed at her beautiful daughter and thought, Oh Zenarra you are so much stronger and braver than I was when I married Samar.

Are you ready? Our guests are waiting for us to begin the banquet, Denarras reached out for her daughter’s hand.

I am ready, mother. The two women walked together toward the banquet hall.

As they entered the hall, Zenarra’s eyes scanned the room. All of the important male members of the Dorchas and Solas Clans were seated and she could hear their loud voices and laughter. She noticed that they were laughing and smiling but the glint in their eyes betrayed a deep mistrust. Zenarra saw Tomar seated at the large table at the front of the hall. The bridal table was on a raised platform so all the guests would have a clear view of the couple. Zenarra’s eyes sought out another. Lord Jennar was the leader of her father’s army. She saw him standing in the shadows behind Tomar with the rest of the Solas Honor Guard. Their eyes met and she slowly nodded her head. Jennar leapt forward and grabbed Tomar by the hair. Light gleamed off the sword that quickly ran across Tomar’s throat. The Dorchas Clan leaders rose as one and cried out in rage. The Solas Clan was ready with swords drawn to begin the battle. Zenarra rushed her mother to a safe hiding place behind a wall in her bed chamber.

What are you doing, Zenarra? You will bring destruction down upon this house, Denarras’ eyes were wide with fear.

I could not marry that evil man, mother. It is time for us to fight against the oppression of the women of our clan. It is time for the women to take their true place as leaders along with the men.

Zenarra threw off her heavy gown and jewels. She had worn her tunic and leggings under her dress. She grabbed her chest plate and hurriedly strapped it on with the help of her loyal servant Manet. She took up her sword and ran toward the battle and her future as head of the Solas Clan and ruler of Lunaris.

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Image by Pixabay.com

Word Count: 651 words

Criticism: General

If you would like to read some of the back story about Zenarra, here are links to the previous flash fiction stories:

The Arranged Marriage

Princess Zenarra

The Galaxy Trees






28 thoughts on “Zenarra the Warrior Queen

  1. Yolanda Renee

    “It is time for the women to take their true place as leaders along with the men.” The fight is unending, as we all know. I love this story and I especially enjoy a story where women challenge the status quo. Great addition the Holiday Celebrations that are out of this world. Thanks, Deborah. The pictures of your heroine are an excellent edition. Love the armor, but that dress and headdress had to cause a headache if not a neck ache. But we’ve, as in most of us, have worn worse. 🙂
    Wishing you and yours a very Merry Holiday, and a prosperous and peace-filled New Year!

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  2. Denise Covey

    Hi Deborah! Wow, I like the kick butt attitude of Zenarra. A warrior queen all right! I love the images too that go with the story. They add a nice visual. So that little celebration turned bad for some. I like the generation gap between mother and daughter, too.

    Thanks for participating in the challenge at this busy time of year!

    Merry Christmas and all the best for the New Year!

    Denise 🙂

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  3. odell01

    Fun, atmospheric in a way sci-fi demonstrates, which I would say is consistent with the challenge that inspired this. The visuals, by which I mean the pictures in the post, are very pretty, too.

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    1. Deborah Drucker Post author

      Thank You. Zenarra lives in a hard world but she is not evil like Tomar and will be a kind Queen. She has to win the battle with the Dorchas Clan first though. Thanks for reading and thanks for the poem. 🙂


  4. dolorah

    Loved the costumes; and the twist. Way cool to fight against women’s oppression. I love a sword wielding woman. Excellent descriptions; this is so visual – even without the pics. I’m loving the characters, setting, and the plot. Well done.

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