46 thoughts on “Disturb at Your Own Risk”

1. hafong November 4, 2015 at 3:40 pm

   Hair raising! My shackles are up. I hope they can deal with the situation.

   Lily

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   1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 4, 2015 at 5:55 pm

      We will have to wait and see….:)

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2. LifestyleswithLia November 4, 2015 at 4:20 pm

   Omg!!! Love this! Creepy, sci-fi style!!

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   1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 4, 2015 at 5:56 pm

      Thank You 🙂 ❤

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3. Dan Antion November 4, 2015 at 5:47 pm

   Eeeew. So glad this is fiction. Nice job.

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   1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 4, 2015 at 5:57 pm

      Did I say it was fiction…:D Thank You!

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      1. Dan Antion November 4, 2015 at 6:04 pm

         Don’t do that …

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      2. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 4, 2015 at 6:05 pm

         OK. 🙂

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4. Dale November 4, 2015 at 7:27 pm

   Tentacles coming out of the earth cannot be a good thing…

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   1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 4, 2015 at 8:13 pm

      No, I don’t think so…:)

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5. Yolanda Renee November 4, 2015 at 8:16 pm

   Invasion, love it, so creepy! Well done!

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   1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 4, 2015 at 8:17 pm

      Thank You very much YR! 🙂

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6. Courtney Wright November 4, 2015 at 9:09 pm

   Ooo… that’s kind of creepy! Well done Deborah! 🙂

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   1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 4, 2015 at 9:09 pm

      Thank You Courtney. 🙂

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7. Margaret November 4, 2015 at 9:26 pm

   Oh dear. Such a grisly end. Very spooky stuff.

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   1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 4, 2015 at 9:29 pm

      Thank You, Margaret. 🙂

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8. Sandra November 5, 2015 at 12:24 am

   It’s not Japanese Knotweed is it? 😉 Scary stuff Deborah. Truly.

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   1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 5, 2015 at 7:22 am

      I don’t know but I am not going to hang around to find out 😉 Thank You Sandra. 🙂

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9. Fourth Generation Farmgirl November 5, 2015 at 4:26 am

   I loved it! I’m on the edge of my seat–great twist at the end. 🙂

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   1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 5, 2015 at 7:25 am

      Thank You Tanya! ❤

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10. ansumani November 5, 2015 at 6:08 am

    Scary story. Great descriptions and imagery in just a few words.

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    1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 5, 2015 at 7:27 am

       Thank You. 🙂

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11. Priceless Joy November 5, 2015 at 6:46 am

    Ohhh, spooky good! 🙂

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    1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 5, 2015 at 7:27 am

       Thank You Joy. 🙂

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12. creatingahome November 5, 2015 at 7:27 am

    Creepy scary crawlers.

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13. ceayr November 5, 2015 at 12:29 pm

    Clever story.

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    1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 5, 2015 at 12:43 pm

       Thank You.

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14. Solothefirst November 5, 2015 at 1:58 pm

    Oooooo creepy! Love it 😀 but tentacles…. Nooooo I hate tentacles!

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    1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 5, 2015 at 2:28 pm

       Thank You! Well it looked like a tentacle to me. 😀

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15. rochellewisoff November 5, 2015 at 2:16 pm

    Dear Deborah,

    Did you ever see the 80’s sci fi Enemy Mine. This reminds me of a scene from it. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 5, 2015 at 2:30 pm

       Thank You Rochelle. I don’t think I did see that one. But I do like Sci-Fi.

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       1. rochellewisoff November 5, 2015 at 2:42 pm

          Look it up, it’s one of the best. Wasn’t a great box office hit but worth seeing. With Dennis Quaid and Lou Gossett Jr.

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       2. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 5, 2015 at 6:21 pm

          I will have to check it out. Thanks Rochelle. 🙂

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16. plaridel November 5, 2015 at 2:38 pm

    you got me! i didn’t expect it would end like that! 🙂

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    1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 5, 2015 at 6:20 pm

       Ha, ha. Glad you liked it. 🙂

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17. rgayer55 November 5, 2015 at 2:58 pm

    I can just see the dog catcher out there with his little noose on a stick. Ha! That would be entertaining.

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    1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 5, 2015 at 6:22 pm

       LOL. He would be in for a big surprise. They could have a tug of war. 🙂

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18. jellico84 November 6, 2015 at 5:45 am

    good hook at the end. LOL! loved it.

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    1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 6, 2015 at 9:38 am

       Thank You!

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19. gahlearner November 6, 2015 at 3:09 pm

    That was a nice and creepy surprise. There I thought it was a crime story, and then… eeek. 😀

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    1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 6, 2015 at 5:59 pm

       Yes it would make a great crime story based on a LA times report that there really were bones found. But that image looked like a tentacle to me. 🙂

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20. joseph elon lillie November 7, 2015 at 3:52 pm

    Reminds me of Tremors.

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    1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 7, 2015 at 5:18 pm

       LOL. Well I honestly didn’t remember those movies until you mentioned it. Those Tremors movies were crazy and not too bad. 🙂

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       1. joseph elon lillie November 8, 2015 at 4:56 am

          🙂

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21. patriciaruthsusan November 9, 2015 at 10:37 pm

    Looks like the deputy got a little too close to the tentacle. That’s creepy. Well done, Deborah. 🙂 — Suzanne

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    1. Deborah Drucker Post authorNovember 10, 2015 at 9:21 am

       Yes he got too close or it might of crept up on him. Thank You very much, Suzanne. 🙂

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