The Unexpected Stop


The Senior Center sponsored the trip to Las Vegas. The package included a hotel and 2 meal vouchers at a cheap price. The bus had seen better days but it was a cheap getaway for those with low paying jobs or on a pension. The bus made a stop in the middle of the desert which was not listed in the trip’s brochure. The passengers looked around confused. The front door creaked open and a dark figure climbed on. Thank You Roy, the Master will love this bunch, as he spoke they could see his sharp pointy teeth.  

This is my contribution for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Above image by Ron Pruitt.

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36 thoughts on “The Unexpected Stop

  1. LifestyleswithLia

    Deborah! This is super creepy and an awesome short story! Yipes! I could imagine the scene with the unexpected stop and passenger coming on board!!

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