The saloon had been bequeathed to Kitty by the person who shared her name, her beloved grandmother Miss Kitty, who was the original owner and proprietor of The Long Branch Saloon in Dodge City. Kitty had spent many hours playing upstairs in her grandmother’s apartment while the saloon was readied for another night of raucous activity. Grandmother was a widow but Kitty remembered a special man who visited the Long Branch in an official and sometimes unofficial capacity. He was tall, rugged, and handsome with piercing blue eyes. He often brought little gifts for the girl. Those were happy times. She never thought she would be happy again after her own husband left her without a penny to her name. She smiled as she remembered the letter from her grandmother that was attached to the will, I hope you will consider taking over The Long Branch. It has always brought me luck and I know it will do the same for you. Kitty smiled again as Matt walked through the saloon door.
Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers is hosted by Priceless Joy of the Beautiful Words blog. Image of saloon is courtesy of Etol Bagam.
That brought a nice smile to my face today!
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Thank You, Dan. 🙂
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The Long Branch Saloon has brought her luck! It has brought her a new love. Wonderful story Deborah!
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Thank You, Joy. 🙂
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Sound like an intriguing start to a broader story. Maybe?
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I really like westerns and maybe someday I would be able to write a longer story. Probably need to start with a short story. 🙂
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I enjoyed the story, but a little confused as to who is Matt? Is he her future?
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Kitty was remembering the note from her grandmother that went along with the will that gave her the saloon. Then we see that her grandmother’s prediction came true in the present. Kitty had met Matt and fallen in love with him.
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Ok that’s what I thought but wasn’t sure if Matt was just walking in or already prt of the picture
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Well, I guess it could be either way. But he is definitely in the picture now. 😉 Thanks for reading!
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It’s wonderful that her Grandmother left her with the ability to continue being happy there and start a new life with someone that really cared about her. Lovely story. 🙂
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Thank You. I am glad it worked out to a happy ending too. 🙂
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Awww, what a sweet story, now that kitty has gotten the salon, I hope she gets the love of her life too
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Thank You. I think she will. 🙂
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…and they lived happily ever after. Lovely story, Deborah! Made me smile.
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Thank You. I like happy endings. Glad you liked it. 🙂
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