It was the night of grand premiere at the Odyssey Theatre. Max told her there was nothing to worry about. He had perfected the illusion. She was perfectly safe. Lilou wanted to trust him. Him with the beautiful dark eyes. She had fallen for him the instant she met him at the bistro. It was time for Max’s most famous illusion, The Shrinking Woman. Lilou took her position. The orchestra played the dramatic fanfare. Max proclaimed his intention of making Lilou disappear and to have her reappear in a small cupboard on the table. He waved his wand and recited the spell, ” d’ici a la bas! ” Lilou vanished in a pale blue cloud. Max opened the cupboard, “Voila!” Lilou daintily stepped out and curtsied to the crowd. She was only six inches tall. The audience erupted into loud cheers and applause. The curtain closed. When are you changing me back? Lilou wondered out loud. Regrettablement, I have not mastered the reverse spell, Max frowned as he placed her in the chest with the others.
This is my contribution for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers hosted by the lovely Priceless Joy. Image courtesy of Etol Bagam.
He needs to work on that. Great story
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Yes he does. Thank You. 🙂
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This is the best short story I’ve read in a long time, Deborah!
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Thank you so much Mark. I am touched by your compliment! ❤
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This story is wonderful Deborah! I love the twist at the end, “…he placed her in the chest with the others.” LOL! Guess she should have been more informed before she agreed to the magic trick. Thank you again, for participating in FFfAW challenge!
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Thank You Joy! 🙂
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Wonderful story, Deborah! I was hoping for an ending like this 😀
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Thank You Sonya! 🙂
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What a creepy magician. Great story!
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Yes. Thank You!
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What suspense! I adore this story! Masterfully crafted! Your flash fictions are inspiring me to write ;)))
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Thanks so much Lia ❤ You honor me. 🙂
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You are into spells and potions aren’t you. I did enjoy this tale well done.
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Yes. I think I am in the Halloween frame of mind now. Either that or I am in touch with my dark side. Thank You!
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Great story – totally unexpected ending.
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Thank You Dan! 🙂
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At least she was among others that were the same size. Great story.
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That’s true, she was not alone. Thank You! 🙂
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WITH THE OTHERS?!! Here I thought this was flowing into a happily ever after ending, then wham! …with the others… HAS HE NO SHAME? O.O Wow, oh, wow. One of my favorite endings 😀
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LOL! Thank You very much! 🙂
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Nothing wrong with a little woman! I though he was going to cut her in half. Love your version so much more.
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Thank You! Yes I had to think about what kind of trick he would perform that would be his greatest one. 🙂
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Great story! I wonder how many women he’s going to shrink before he works out the reverse? Or before someone works out that all his “Shrinking Women” go missing after the performance…
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Thank You! I hope for the women’s sake he figures it out soon! 🙂
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He did what??! She should sue him, well when she gets back to size. Great story!
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Yes false representation! Thank you very much!
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I wonder just how many tiny women he has in there? Just because they’re rather small doesn’t make them completely helpless, especially if there’s enough of them. If only they can get out of the chest… A wonderful story. 🙂
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He may have a revolt on his hands pretty soon. Thank You! 🙂
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Oh no, I was worried as soon as he started reassuring her, and boy, it was even worse than I thought! Great suspense and surprise ending. I bet she’s wishing she’d asked for references from his previous assistants — before ending up in the chest with all of them.
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Yes if only she got wind of it sooner. 🙂 Thank You!
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Oh boy! Now that is one unexpected ending. If only she had gone with her gut instinct. I love a good suspense,and this was great.
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Thank You Ammena! Appreciate it! 🙂
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